Thursday, November 1, 2007
Review
I already realize that my main goal isnt very specific in the intro paragraph and I could really use more citations throughout the body, so we can skip that. I might not have used enough facts and information either. It might be because there is just so much to say and not enough room to say it.
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I think you should give yourself some more credit. From the intro, I can tell what your main goal is, to discuss the issues, both pro and con, associated with cloning. You are correct that you need some more citations and quotes of factual information but that is easy to add. If you are worried about too much to say and not enough room to say it, try adding smaller parts of info so you can still get the point across. Also, go through and make sure to check spelling and grammar. You paper does flow very well and I think that if you are able to integrate some factual information that it will become very strong.
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